This is really good ! You are getting scouted. I like the intro, i like the progression and the process on the 8 bit kick and snare. That pluky synth, percussive lines and saw chords stack really gives that tension. The melody is really catchy. My only concern with that pre chorus is how simple is it, using different synths for the theme or adding a riser instead of just putting a low-pass filter could have created more contrast and an impactful drop. The chorus is really catchy and energetic, I'm digging it ! That PWM lead sound really does its job. the break is efficient the chiptune synths are simple but flow together very well. That melodic bridge after the second chorus sounds epic. I like how you varied the main theme and the melody on the last section ! The only issue I could tell is the lack of white noise or cymbals, but using just a kick and snare might just be a matter of aesthetic in this type of music. I'm not hearing any issue with the mix, it sounds bright and clear. To sum up, a very catchy and energetic track, simple without being generic and efficient in its arrangement and melodies. Could work very well for a video game !
This is a fakebit track so I disregarded the old school polyphony rules, but I didn't want to go crazy with effects like some fakebits do to create a dense wall of sound. Because of this some parts feel slightly underproduced. It sounds somewhere in between a traditional chiptune and an overproduced fakebit.
I think the lack of white noise or cymbals was mainly due to me being inexperienced, I kept most of the percussions quite simple. I'll look to improve on it in the future.
Thanks for the feedback and scout, it was very helpful :)
This is really simple but yet catchy, could work well for a video game stage loop !
thanks, I believe when i first made this i had some plans for it but never got to finish
Great music ! Simple but beautfiful, the piano pattern, your voice and the pad fit perfectly together. I like the chord progression on the chorus it gives to the despair a bit of hope. the wind melodies are superb. I like the melancholic lyrics . I dont hear any issue with the mix. Great emotionnal music, very pleasing to hear !
great sound design !!
thanks lol. NO MORE MAKING MUSIC FOR THIS GUY. its too hard! and im awful at it >:) your beats are really good though, ill leave it to the pros ;p
Really cool very good drums mixing and nice sound design. The atmosphere in the song is awesome. This kind of dark retro vibes make me think of kill the noise part 1 Awesome !
Waw this is very impressive and hypnotizing, the atmosphere is very immersive, i had chills to this Really nice vocals used in a original way the high pitch vibrato notes remind me gandalf's death soundtrack. nice synths also and the percussions are so good, it makes everything so intense ! I can meditate to this and it could perfectly fit for a movie or something like a space documentary
Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.
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